Grading Obama’s State of the Union Speech
Bottom-line: Style: A Substance: C
It’s not that I didn’t like what the President had to say; I did. But the speech summarized apple pie, motherhood, and the American dream. What’s not to like? With the exception of a few brief lines, everybody in the chamber could have applauded every word, had they not been familiar with the pending legislation and issues facing Congress this year.
Substance: What’s Not to Like?
An upbeat theme: “Win the future”
Three points and a poem, er, uh, story: “Innovate. Educate. And rebuild our country.”
Specific stories to illustrate his main points: 1) The Allen brothers who reinvented their roofing business when the recession hit illustrated our capacity for innovation. 2) The Denver high school represented American’s educational system done right. 3) Brad Fisher, owner of the small business that manufactured the drill used to free the Chilean miners and whose employee commented, “We’re a little company, but we do big things” underscores the American spirit to do big things.
An emotional tribute at the opening (to Gabby Giffords) and at the close (to the humble beginnings of the VP and Speaker of the House seated behind him and to the America that made their success possible)
Style: Well Crafted and On Par with His Days as a Candidate
Setting: A speaker’s effect always depends to some degree on the setting. So two things worked in the President’s favor tonight: Members of Congress sitting as buddies rather than enemies and a camera shot of John Boehner behind him, with misty eyes and quivering chin at every emotional line or illustration. (Bless Boehner’s heart—wish I could take him that dear sensitive man to my own speeches!)
A modest, concillatory tone (The pointing finger and uplifted chin were gone tonight.)
Great pausing and pacing: Plenty of time to let his message resonate
Humor: For example, on his point about simplifying government, he referred to multiple agencies handling overlapping functions. Specifically, he admitted confusion over the fact that one agency regulated salmon in fresh water and a different agency regulated salmon in salt water. “I’m told it’s even more complicated when they’re smoked.”
Figures of Speech: In talking about slashing the wrong items from the budget, he made the analogy of cutting the engine out of an airplane to lighten the load: “It won’t be long before you feel the impact.”
Alliteration: Example: “We need to show our kids that it’s not just the winner of the Super Bowl that needs to be celebrated, but the winner of the Science Fair.”
All in all, I’d say the President’s supporters enjoyed the speech, and his opponents couldn’t find much of substance to criticize.





